This is such a great story about Charlie Bucket, you have done an excellent job describing him. I really like how you used the word generous to describe Charlie, because even though he was starving he shared his birthday chocolate with his whole family.
I really enjoyed reading Charlie and the Chocolate Factory to you and I'm sure Miss Burne has too. It is great to see you improving every day with your writing PJ I am really proud, keep up the amazing work,
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Hi PJ
This is such a great story about Charlie Bucket, you have done an excellent job describing him. I really like how you used the word generous to describe Charlie, because even though he was starving he shared his birthday chocolate with his whole family.
I really enjoyed reading Charlie and the Chocolate Factory to you and I'm sure Miss Burne has too. It is great to see you improving every day with your writing PJ I am really proud, keep up the amazing work,
From Miss Szymanik :)
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